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Re: [council] NCtelecon, 8 February, minutes for validation bythe NC
on 15/02/01 3:30, Erica Roberts at erica.roberts@bigpond.com wrote:
> Thanks you - it is good to see the draft produced in a timely fashion.
> In order to facilitate amendments, I have moved the minutes into a word
> document and put on the 'track changes' instruction so that the changes I
> propose can be clearly seen (see attached).
>
> I have reviewed the draft and have proposed amendments to:
> * clarify the sense
> * delete emotive phrasing
>
> regards,
> erica
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Good corrections, Erica
I was not participating, but I completed anyway a sentence about proxies at
the beginning (Track changes in the word file).
Regards
Dany
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