Re: [registrars] Letter Approval

[Rob Hall <rob@momentous.ca>]

Michael,

Here are a couple of grammatical errors that need correcting.

1) Under "Problem" first paragraph, first sentence  "have recently adopted 
their procedures "  should probably be "have recently modified their 
procedures" or "have recently adopted new procedures"

2) same section, 4th paragraph "The emails sent by the registrars who are 
changing the procedures" should be "their procedures".

3)  same section, 5th paragraph "The actions of the these registrars" 
should be "The actions of these registrars"

4) Last paragraph of the letter "Furthermore, the Constituency eagerly 
await guidance from ICANN on how to " should be "eagerly awaits guidance" 
or alternately, "Furthermore, the members of the Constituency eagerly await 
guidance "

These are just a few I have found.

As well, do we want to change any of the section dealing with "Dan 
Halloran's comments and response" given that we now have more information 
and additional responses from Dan.

Rob.


At 11:57 AM 8/2/2001 -0400, you wrote:
>Hello All
>
>Earlier in the week it was decided by the newly elected officers that to
>ensure that the draft letter I proposed sending to ICANN had the full
>backing of the Constituency, the new secretariat would contact those members
>that had advocated their support in the past to make sure their position had
>not change. Unfortunately, our new secretariat is on vacation, so the old
>secretariat, yours truly, is handling this responsibility.
>
>Please send me a direct e-mail indicating thumbs up or thumbs down on
>whether the letter should be sent.
>
>In connection with the excellent letter from Active ISP documenting once
>again the serious flaws in the autoNAC policy, I encourage other registrars
>to continue to submit these types of evidence to me, the list and ICANN.
>These examples will form the foundation of the Registrar Position paper that
>will be advanced for potential submission to the Names Council prior to
>Montevideo.
>
>Thanks
>
>Mike



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